Revisions #9- Script

Christine and I felt like our film didn't really hit its mark when we showed it to our classes, so we revised it and completely changed it. Some people said that it was really slow in the forest scenes and the plot line had a huge gap in it. Soon the new script, the audience will actually be seeing the monster and see it capture and "eat" its prey.

MISSING

ACT 1

A BASKETBALL IS BOUNCING AND JAXOSN AND PLAYING BASKETBALL.
Whisper*
JAXSON LOOKS OVER BEHIND THE HOUSE TOWARDS THE SOUND AND RUNS TOWARDS IT.
Whisper*
JAXSON CONTINUES TO FOLLOW THE SOUND
Whisper*
JAXSON SEES THE DEMONIC BEING AND SOWLEY WALKS UP TO IT. THE BEING PUTS ITS HAND OUT AND BECKONS JAXSON CLOSER. JAXSON REACHES HIS HAND TO THE BEING.
Jaxson Screams

JAXSON CRAWLS ON THE GROUND, AS IF HE IS BEING DRAGGED. 

ACT 2

(MUFFLED CHATTER IN THE HALLWAY OF A HIGH SCHOOL)

A GROUP OF HIGHSCHOOL GIRLS ARE WALKING AND TALKING DOWN THE HALLWAY.
THE GROUP SEPERATES, LEAVING ONE GIRL ALONE AND WALKS TOWARDS THE HALLWAY ACCOUNCEMENTS BOARD.
THE HIGH SCHOOL GIRL IS PUTS UP A MISSING PERSON SIGN OF JAXON ON THE SCHOOL ANNOUNCEMENTS BOARD. WHEN A LARGER ANGLE IS SHOWN, THE BOARD IS FILLED WITH MISSING PEOPLE POSTERS, AND THE GIRL PUTTING UP THE POSTERS IS STANDING WITH TRIUMPH.
School Bell Rings
"HEY CHLOE"
THE GIRL LOOKS UP QUICKLY AND THE AUDIENCE SEES HER BLACK, DEMONIC AND SOULLESS EYES.
"COME ON, CHLOE LET'S GO"
THE GIRL IS CALLED BY A CLASSMATE AND FOLLOWS HIM OUT OF THE HALLWAY, WITHOUT BLACK EYES, AND SMILES CREEPILY AT HER CLASSMATE.